Reading Crime and Punishment: The Trial Begins the Same Day as the Murder

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In six parts the arrest, the interrogation and the sentence are all saved for the end; the heaviest punishment falls in the first days after the killing, one man in a Petersburg attic prosecuting himself. With the six-part skeleton, four annotated passages, a warning about editions, and three reading habits that stuck.

1. Why I Read It

I read Crime and Punishment the first time as a detective novel. The murder woke me up; then the police kept not coming, and instead page after page of a man talking to himself in a room, and I nearly skipped ahead. I never finished that copy.

The second time was at night, under a desk lamp. I reached Svidrigailov describing the eternity he imagined — a little country bath-house with spiders in every corner — and I closed the book and sat there for half a minute. Only then did I see that the novel is not about who committed a crime. It is about how a man passes sentence on himself.

What tipped me off was a matter of arithmetic: the murder is done by the end of Part One, yet the interrogation, the sentence and Siberia are all crowded into the last two parts. The five hundred pages in between have Raskolnikov in a Petersburg attic, feverish, raving, receiving visitors, lying. He is the one under interrogation, and he is the one doing it.

2. The Skeleton First

Crime and Punishment was serialised in The Russian Messenger in 1866. It runs to six parts and an epilogue, is set in St Petersburg, and covers roughly a fortnight in July. The protagonist is Raskolnikov, a law student who has dropped out; around him are Sonia, the Marmeladov family, his fellow student Razumihin, the examining magistrate Porfiry, and Svidrigailov.

It is easy to read this as a three-step story — crime, investigation, confession — but the weight sits elsewhere. I lay it out by asking where the punishment actually falls:

PartTimeMain events
Part OneBefore the murderThe garret, the pawnbroker, the mother’s letter, a dream, the act itself
Part TwoThe day and the day afterHiding the loot, fainting, the police station, the first confrontation with his own conscience
Part ThreeThe next few daysHis mother and Dunya arrive, Razumihin in between, Porfiry’s first probing
Part FourA day laterSonia reads Lazarus, Svidrigailov calls, Porfiry lays his cards down
Part FiveThe funeral dinnerLuzhin’s trap, Katerina’s dinner, Sonia taking the blame for someone else
Part SixThe closeSvidrigailov’s death, the confession, the road to Siberia
EpilogueYears laterSiberia, Sonia’s visits, one line about a new story
Expand: who does what (my own annotations)
  • Raskolnikov: neither a genius nor a madman — a man who thought his excuse through too carefully and backed himself into a corner
  • Sonia: forced into prostitution, and the only person in the book who calculates nothing; she is suffering embodied, and the only way out
  • Marmeladov: the tavern monologue turns a man needing somewhere to go into the book’s ground note
  • Porfiry: the magistrate who does his work by chatting; he is almost the only one who keeps to the rules
  • Svidrigailov: the most dangerous and the clearest-eyed man in the book, and the other fork in Raskolnikov’s road
  • Razumihin: the only reasonably normal young man, there to haul the reader out of the dizziness

One warning: do not read Porfiry as Sherlock Holmes. He never has to guess, only to press; what he is really doing is building Raskolnikov a step down.

3. Passages and Marginalia

On the theory: one question that backs him into a corner

“Am I a trembling creature, or do I have the right?”

— Raskolnikov, questioning himself

My own working translation.

This is the heart of the book. He sorts humanity into two heaps: most are trembling creatures who must keep the rules; a few have the right to step over, and may walk across other people to reach their end.

笔记Before the murder he wrote an article, “On Crime”, which makes killing sound like an examination you sit. But once the murder is done, the theory fails at once: he can neither enjoy the money in peace nor rest easy the way Napoleon supposedly did. The theory is the coat; the fear is the body.

On having somewhere to go: the harshest monologue in the book

“A man must have somewhere he can go.”

— Part One, Chapter 2; Marmeladov, drunk in the tavern, to Raskolnikov

My own working translation (paraphrase).

危险One drunken line, and the whole predicament is laid out. Sober, he is a useless clerk; drunk, he sounds almost like a philosopher. What he wants is not forgiveness but a place where he is allowed to sit down.

My note: Dostoevsky rarely says a kind word about the poor. He lets Marmeladov spill out the whole shameful inventory himself, then asks whether even a wretch like this should have somewhere to go. The question is still hanging at the epilogue, and Sonia is one of its answers.

On the bow: one gesture doing the work of a thousand lines

“I did not bow down to you, I bowed down to all human suffering.”

— Part Four, Chapter 4; Raskolnikov, entering Sonia’s room for the first time, bowing low to her

My own working translation.

Later readers quoted this bow to death; in the original it is blunt. He frightens her first, then explains: it is not you I bow to, it is everyone’s suffering.

着重点Later in the same chapter he asks her to read the raising of Lazarus out of the Gospel of John. What is read aloud is a resurrection; the man listening counts himself among the dead: he needs another person’s voice, another person’s story, to find a chance of coming back to life.

笔记Read the two together, one gesture and one reading. Sonia does not refute his theory; she simply lays the word resurrection in front of him and lets him run into it.

On eternity: the coldest image in the book

“We always picture eternity as something vast, beyond understanding. But what if it is only a little room, like a village bath-house, black with soot and spiders in every corner? That is all eternity is.”

— Svidrigailov, on his first visit to Raskolnikov

My own working translation.

The closest thing to hell in the book, spoken by the man least afraid of hell. Svidrigailov plays neither the good man nor the villain; he describes it the way you would describe the weather.

笔记He answers the question Sonia leaves open: if there is nothing after death, what stops a man from doing anything he likes? His answer is nothing at all, and so he dies. Sonia’s answer is that there is still another person, and so she lives. The book’s two forks stand side by side right here.

Does the rescue at the end hold up?

Two camps. One says that in the epilogue Raskolnikov suddenly falls in love with Sonia in Siberia, that the change comes too fast, and that it is a religious answer bolted on by the author. The other says that from the tavern in Part One to Lazarus in Part Four the line is laid all along, and the change has been brewing from the start. My reading: the first six parts are the question, the epilogue is the author’s answer. You may not accept the answer, but you cannot say it came from nowhere.

One trap in translations

There are many Chinese versions, and the first gate is names. One person can differ by several characters between books — Raskolnikov, Sonia or Sofia, Marmeladov, Svidrigailov. Harder still is Russian address: a person carries a Christian name, a patronymic, a surname and two diminutives at once, and the whole novel marks distance by who calls whom what. A good version makes clear who is speaking to whom the first time a name appears; a bad one leaves you halfway through, unsure whether Rodka and Rodion are one person1.

4. Three Reading Habits That Actually Stuck

  1. Read the theory and the deed separately. On Crime is the brief he wrote for himself. Do not trust it; watch what he does first, then watch how he explains it. The gap between the two is what the book is really about.
  2. Count how many times he is already being punished. Do not wait for the arrest; count the days after the murder — fainting at the police station, Porfiry’s casual pressing, Svidrigailov seeing straight through him. The punishment started long ago.
  3. Watch the temperature of names. Who calls him Rodka, who calls him Rodion Romanovich, who uses only the surname — the warm and cold of every relationship sits in those forms. It is the nearest thing to a master key for reading Russian novels.

5. Closing

What struck me hardest was not the murder but what the book does with cleverness. Raskolnikov is no fool; he reasoned it out more carefully than anyone. Precisely because he reasoned it out too carefully, he locked himself in a room with no exit. Dostoevsky neither mocks him nor forgives him; he simply lets him finish speaking.

Next: One Hundred Years of Solitude. Again a study of people trapped by their own obsession — one in a Petersburg attic, one in the town of Macondo. One takes a fortnight, the other a hundred years. I want to see whether the length of time changes the taste of solitude.

Footnotes

  1. In Russian a person often has four or more forms of address: the Christian name with patronymic (Rodion Romanovich), the surname (Raskolnikov), and two diminutives of differing closeness (Rodka, Rodion). Swap the form inside one conversation and you swap the relationship. It is the first thing most translations lose, and the most important door into novels of this kind. ↩

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